i’m doing a long report on an online class, so could someone proofread my paper? i suck at english, and its not one of my best subjects, so sorry if its really bad…i don’t have a job, so the prof. suggested some real world topic, so i picked climate change.don’t worry, i won’t post the whole thing. that would be way too long. for now, i’ll just post the Memo. just use: (CORRECTION),
like if my sentence was:
he have money.
just put:
he have(HAS) money.
please and thank you.
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MEMORANDUM
Date: 11/17/2008
To: Carl Levin, Senator
Cc:
From: Shawn Armer
RE: Climate Change
______________________
Please review the following information you have requested on 10/31/2008 on climate change, and its effects, and what will happen in the future and how we can slow climate change down.
Climate Change will effect everybody on this planet. If the temperature keeps going up, there could be consequences, even if the temperature goes up by a few degrees, this could led into global problems. There is no way to completely stop it, but there is a way we can slow down the effects of Climate Change.
Most of the solutions are easy to make, and can save people money. we need to have everybody ban together and pitch in, in order to make the changes that need to take place, whether it would be at home, or at a business. Most of the change is just changing to eco-friendly items, like switching to energy star products .Most importantly, we need to get the word out, so everybody can make a difference in our environment, and slow down the effects of climate change.
This however is no easy task, especially if there is no backbone to it. If the government were to make standards, like how we are switching from analog to digital for our TVs, people have no say in it, so they have to do it. We could do the same, help our environment, and slow down climate change.
Thank you for taking the time to read this. I was glad to do the research, and a learned a few things. I certainly hope we can get something done about this problem.
cool, thanks for the help, now i have :
Please review the fallowing information you have requested on 10/31/2008 on climate change, and its effects, and what will happen in the future and how we can slow climate change down.
Climate Change will effect everybody on this planet. If the temperature keeps going up, there could be consequences; even if the temperature goes up by a few degrees, this could lead into global problems. There is no way to completely stop it, but there is a way we can slow down the effects of climate change.
Most of the solutions are easy to implement and can save people money. We need to have everybody ban together in order to make the changes that need to take place, weather it would be at home or a business. Most of the change is just converting to eco-friendly items like Energy Star, but most importantly, we need to get the word out, so everybody can make a difference in our environment and slow down the effects of climate change.
This however is no easy ta
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got cut off, guess i’ll just make another topic…
Please review the following information you have requested on 10/31/2008 on climate change, and its effects, and what will happen in the future and how we can slow climate change down.
Climate Change will effect everybody on this planet. If the temperature keeps going up, there could be consequences, even if the temperature goes up by a few degrees, this could led(LEAD) into global problems. There is no way to completely stop it, but there is a way we can slow down the effects of Climate Change.
Most of the solutions are easy to make, and can save people money. we need to have everybody ban(?) together and pitch in, in order to make the changes that need to take place, whether it would be at home, or at a business(THIS SENTENCE NEEDS TO BE CORRECTED). Most of the change is just changing (CONVERTING) to eco-friendly items, like switching to energy star products .Most importantly, we need to get the word out, so everybody can make a difference in our environment, and slow down the effects of climate change.
This however is no easy task, especially if there is no backbone to it. If the government(S) were to make standards, like how we are switching from analog to digital for our TVs, people have no say in it, so they have to do it. We could do the same, help our environment, and slow down climate change.
Thank you for taking the time to read this. I was glad to do the research, and a learned a few things. I certainly hope we can get something done about this problem.
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